tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6143998869718488694.post2258830760148103250..comments2024-01-17T02:44:32.110-08:00Comments on Invalid's Workshop: ImmensityGeo.http://www.blogger.com/profile/16221314320558128986noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6143998869718488694.post-56930489214739244692017-06-12T10:45:42.147-07:002017-06-12T10:45:42.147-07:00Thank you Sujatha, most kind.Thank you Sujatha, most kind.Geo.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16221314320558128986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6143998869718488694.post-37687594689597670912017-06-12T07:37:46.610-07:002017-06-12T07:37:46.610-07:00few lines and a lot saidfew lines and a lot saidSujatha Sathyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00448034391267400236noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6143998869718488694.post-60005569678546156562017-05-05T20:44:21.297-07:002017-05-05T20:44:21.297-07:00KK, thank you for both your excellent verse and re...KK, thank you for both your excellent verse and reference to Meghadootam. I learn here!Geo.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16221314320558128986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6143998869718488694.post-75516968817071675712017-05-05T20:07:44.524-07:002017-05-05T20:07:44.524-07:00I see clouds
Sometimes doubt
Sometimes inspiration...I see clouds<br />Sometimes doubt<br />Sometimes inspiration<br />That it might rain<br />Or my anticipation might be in vain<br />These clouds come and go<br />Almost like a train<br /><br />----<br /><br />There is a classic Indian play called Meghadootam by Kalidas. A man requests the clouds to take his message to his wife somewhere far away. 'Megha' means cloud and 'doot' means a messenger, so it literally translated to the Cloud Messanger. I have never read it, but your poem reminded me of it.KKhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16778157916183036144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6143998869718488694.post-81997734144713892972017-04-12T13:16:11.231-07:002017-04-12T13:16:11.231-07:00Kind Robyn, Thank you. I hope you're fielding ...Kind Robyn, Thank you. I hope you're fielding a lot of raindrops in Chico. Our drought is over, Hooray!Geo.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16221314320558128986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6143998869718488694.post-8085692131755178502017-04-12T12:37:59.210-07:002017-04-12T12:37:59.210-07:00Raindrops do stop in our hands, don't they? I ...Raindrops do stop in our hands, don't they? I like the meaning behind this. As usual, your photo-poem pairing make for one precious work of art.<br />Be well, Geo.Rawknrobyn.blogspot.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15997241410192066577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6143998869718488694.post-58758269612569039972017-04-11T20:51:05.607-07:002017-04-11T20:51:05.607-07:00Norma has a knack for catching things like that. I...Norma has a knack for catching things like that. I think something cosmic alerts her and gets her running outdoors with her camera.Geo.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16221314320558128986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6143998869718488694.post-36244379595395085722017-04-11T20:48:57.932-07:002017-04-11T20:48:57.932-07:00O-Jenny, my poems are always penned before they ar...O-Jenny, my poems are always penned before they are typed. And yes, the sky seems like an upside down ocean in the sky --waves combed by mountain contours.Geo.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16221314320558128986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6143998869718488694.post-51642437116809775702017-04-11T20:45:01.015-07:002017-04-11T20:45:01.015-07:00Topher Kearby's book comes highly recommended,...Topher Kearby's book comes highly recommended, Rick. I'd love to see YOUR adventure into poetry. I hope you embark upon it.Geo.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16221314320558128986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6143998869718488694.post-40599074077217962322017-04-11T14:21:21.268-07:002017-04-11T14:21:21.268-07:00I like the way the Normaphoto caught the edge of t...I like the way the Normaphoto caught the edge of the cloud. Every bit as impressive as your poem.<br />Emma Springfieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10543689047463574012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6143998869718488694.post-45138254075888635642017-04-11T13:00:51.682-07:002017-04-11T13:00:51.682-07:00The land's features are reflected in the cloud...The land's features are reflected in the cloud banks sometimes, aren't they? We had some of those huge masses two days ago. They have their own dark beauty. Another fine poem from your pen. Or keyboard.jenny_ohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15475480579733466963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6143998869718488694.post-57071962196787256052017-04-11T04:05:46.882-07:002017-04-11T04:05:46.882-07:00You make me want to try my hand at poetry. I'm...You make me want to try my hand at poetry. I'm reading Watercolor of Words by Topher Kearby. It's a beautiful piece of work.Rick Watsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01005727239466916086noreply@blogger.com