tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6143998869718488694.post3731066454610370..comments2024-01-17T02:44:32.110-08:00Comments on Invalid's Workshop: Back Porch PoemGeo.http://www.blogger.com/profile/16221314320558128986noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6143998869718488694.post-64676372662580131902013-10-16T12:12:48.302-07:002013-10-16T12:12:48.302-07:00the idea of catch and release will now give me new...the idea of catch and release will now give me new thoughts.Susan Kanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09834094675218254410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6143998869718488694.post-91933946011665019682013-10-13T14:28:02.343-07:002013-10-13T14:28:02.343-07:00Hey Geo! My piscine thoughts (along with the cepha...Hey Geo! My piscine thoughts (along with the cephalopod and crustacean) never get put back. I prefer it that way. Nice work, Sir. Indigo Indigo Rothhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03957870121933442627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6143998869718488694.post-83936686846528139722013-10-12T20:37:19.622-07:002013-10-12T20:37:19.622-07:00Love how the images in your poem all come together...Love how the images in your poem all come together in "Autumn" under the "yellow light." Makes it feel bright and colorful.Mary Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09429769115085903305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6143998869718488694.post-50371483569041971052013-10-12T08:41:36.065-07:002013-10-12T08:41:36.065-07:00Catching thoughts from the Sea and making them eve...Catching thoughts from the Sea and making them even more sensitive must take a lot of poetic capacity.MunirGhiasuddinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05232362559666320301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6143998869718488694.post-6517976890966534922013-10-09T18:42:55.966-07:002013-10-09T18:42:55.966-07:00Most kind, Michelle. I don't know what it'...Most kind, Michelle. I don't know what it's like. I'd have to sell up and take out impossible loans to even guess. Geo.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16221314320558128986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6143998869718488694.post-20511504132322334862013-10-09T17:59:17.290-07:002013-10-09T17:59:17.290-07:00Oh, you used webby, and angles, and old man, and s...Oh, you used webby, and angles, and old man, and sea, in addition to piscine.<br />I see what you did there.<br />What's it like to live in the mind of a poetic genius? Just wondering...<br />The 'webby yellow light', that's just great. :)Remembering Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14760441035721518260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6143998869718488694.post-5165185835779194402013-10-09T17:48:31.343-07:002013-10-09T17:48:31.343-07:00Most kind.Most kind.Geo.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16221314320558128986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6143998869718488694.post-88085956236994785902013-10-09T17:39:19.777-07:002013-10-09T17:39:19.777-07:00Before I even fully processed your answer, I felt ...Before I even fully processed your answer, I felt pre-emptive tears wanting to form in my eyes. Fish. And Sun. Quite sublime.Suzehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07908805179119217608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6143998869718488694.post-3986807598682611642013-10-09T17:19:05.293-07:002013-10-09T17:19:05.293-07:00Piscine, yes, the ideas wriggle past like red-hot ...Piscine, yes, the ideas wriggle past like red-hot iron fish swimming flames on the Sun! Geo.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16221314320558128986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6143998869718488694.post-64976640647159493292013-10-09T17:16:33.688-07:002013-10-09T17:16:33.688-07:00Thank you Margie! At some point I felt the life of...Thank you Margie! At some point I felt the life of ideas depends on catch and release.Geo.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16221314320558128986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6143998869718488694.post-33796792821966806242013-10-09T16:51:14.155-07:002013-10-09T16:51:14.155-07:00I wish I could ask what you mean by piscine. Oh, w...I wish I could ask what you mean by piscine. Oh, wait. I can. What do you mean by piscine?Suzehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07908805179119217608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6143998869718488694.post-38406249143093411052013-10-09T16:41:18.018-07:002013-10-09T16:41:18.018-07:00Love these words
*Thoughts that must
Be caught...Love these words <br />*Thoughts that must <br /> Be caught and <br /> Returned to the sea.<br /><br />Margiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14433759763753850718noreply@blogger.com