Thursday, July 16, 2009

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Life selects
Certain molecules.
Even in this thought
A trail of atoms
Disrupted changes
The past.

2 comments:

  1. I like this almost haiku form that gives in substance a similar 'Aha!' result. Thanks as always, Geo.!

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  2. Aha moments are certainly celebrated by haiku, but the central principle, ampliative induction, is something we use every time we consult our watches or get our bearings by a landmark. We do these things all the time and yet we are not always astonished. This sort of poetry rewards close attention and deserves more of it. Maybe the mystery will get solved.

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