Wednesday, October 14, 2020

Geometry of Indivisibility

                        

                         (Sunflower and Marigolds from Norma's Garden)

Circle unbroken, we
Woke into an arc, continued
A whole turn and
Learned each word
Reaches for the next.
The text endures. 
It is yours and is, for me,
Mysterious, true.
It surrounds me.
It loves you.

 

10 comments:

  1. The photo and the poem are lovely.

    Love,
    Janie

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    1. Thank you, dear Janie. Poems need a mood and mindset that has escaped me lately, but I'm working on it.

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  2. The mystery of love is beautifully written in this poem.
    Congratulations.
    Regards

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    1. Blessing appreciated and reciprocated. Thank you. Was glad to come across your comment at Myra's blog. Welcome.

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  4. At first, I took this as being about family but reading it a few times, I thought it could be much larger than that. It touched me and made me think further. Norma’s picture is lovely.

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    1. Dear Arleen, yet again your take follows my writing precisely. Writing the little poem consumed 9 weeks. Sometimes it takes a while to make something personal become general. Relayed your compliment to Norma --she's over there smiling.

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  5. A wonderful poem! I love how you portray that sense of an all inclusive circle...that envelopes us all in love and understanding...that stretches far beyond the meaning of mere words themselves...😊😊
    And those flowers are so pretty!
    Thank you so much for sharing this, my friend...and for those kind words you left on my blog. I so appreciate that.

    Do hope you are staying safe and well.

    Have a fabulous weekend!

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    1. Thank you, dear Ygraine, for your kind, generous comment. Weekend went well. Trust yours did also. We are safe and well; hope you are too.

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