Wednesday, March 25, 2009

In Order Of Appearance

Sun pinched from
A plume of
Primordial fire
Lightyears long
Roars at a planet
Evolving a bird
That names itself
With a single
Musical note.
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2 comments:

  1. WillieMarch 26, 2009 at 6:58 PM

    I like this very much, the way I like good haiku at first. Is it an oldie or a newbie?

    Will

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  2. Geo.March 26, 2009 at 10:08 PM

    Will,

    Thanks! Poem began in 1999 with seven lines. Intervening decade furnished two more. So, old and new.

    Geo.

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