Wednesday, March 25, 2009

In Order Of Appearance

Sun pinched from
A plume of
Primordial fire
Lightyears long
Roars at a planet
Evolving a bird
That names itself
With a single
Musical note.

2 comments:

  1. I like this very much, the way I like good haiku at first. Is it an oldie or a newbie?

    Will

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  2. Will,

    Thanks! Poem began in 1999 with seven lines. Intervening decade furnished two more. So, old and new.

    Geo.

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