Saturday, January 23, 2016

Here Is A Wave



Here is a wave 
Rolling off itself
Forward where
Stars swarm around
Each other and
Slide back into 
The sea, where 
I am astonishment
Aware of itself, me.



9 comments:

  1. You captured the enormity of the feeling of awe one feels when one sees a wave like that.

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    1. Thank you, Emma, for reading my poem and for your generous comment.

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  2. The stars, sea, people - all woven into a wondrous cycle. This is another beauty, Geo.

    I'm in awe of your artwork too. It's wonderful and far exceeds a mere "doodle".

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    1. Kind Robyn, a wondrous cycle indeed. I like that!

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    2. If this is a doodle, I wonder how elegant an actual painting from Geo will be.

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  3. Stars do not slide back into the sea. It is just their reflection that slides back with the waves. The stars stay where they are: in the sky.

    I have had a long and not really pleasant day today, but reading this post has really put things in perspective. Thank you for that!

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    1. True, stars don't slosh around in the sea --good thing too! What a navigation hazard! Hope this new year brings you pleasant days.

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  4. Wow...the "oneness" of all creation...the waves, the stars, ourselves...all connected in your magical "doodle"...although I would rather call it a masterpiece of artwork.
    This is absolutely stunning! :))

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