Sunday, April 24, 2016

McClures Beach




Overhanging ferns
Barely quiver.
The little stream
Meandering down
To the beach
Is composed
Of inland storms.

7 comments:

  1. Oh how vividly you bring to life this tiny part of Earth to life...I find myself following this beautiful little stream as it winds it's way to the beach...and I cam smell the damp ferns as I brush by them...reminding me strongly of childhood escapades...:)
    Absolutely delightful! :))

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  2. The picture is beautiful but the prose brings it to life. Lovely!

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  3. I always read your poems at least twice, and that's a compliment, Geo. This one deserved (and got) a third reading.

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  4. You helped turn a not too good day to a great one, Geo! Great lines.

    As per your thoughts, the best of days are made of little good things. Can't be more true.

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  5. I showed this picture to my husband and now he realizes that a Fern can be very pretty. We have one in our living room but it is not as lucky as the one by the stream. I would like to sing your poem to my Fern.

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  6. I would have seen the beauty of the fern even without the picture. Both are lovely.

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