Friday, September 16, 2016

Four Words In Search Of Punctuation


One looks
Into it

It looks 
Into one

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  1. You should learn to be brief in your word :)
    My sad attempt at humor. The illustration for this poem is striking.
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    1. Humor most welcome! Poem started as "Seven Words...", so that's progress.

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  2. LOVE LOVE LOVE this, Geo!!!
    So few words...such profound meaning.
    Living wood...like in my log cabin - there are eyes everywhere - I always feel I'm being watched...;))

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    1. Kind Ygraine, sometimes it's necessary to reduce an idea down as far as it will go --turn it into garden stepping-stones or a log cabin. We are reality observing itself.

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  3. HAH! Well done!! Amazingly eye-like knot, as well.

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  4. O Jenny, thanks. Norma found the knothole on our property. I found the poem in my back pages.

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  5. Perplexing, intriguing - fun word play. Applause, Geo.

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  6. For some reason my comment did not transfer to you. I noticed that the eye is an optical illusion. First it looks in one direction then it seems to shift and look in the opposite direction.

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