Sunday, May 16, 2010

Seven Words In Search Of Punctuation

One looks
Into it
It looks
Into one

What is
Created
Created
What is

One is
Created into
What is created
Into one

2 comments:

  1. I think either you've created anew poetic form or you've found one I never knew bout (and there are probably bazillions of those). In any event your manipulation of these words makes entire sense to me, and I like the 8-6-8 words/three verse format for its playfulness and balance.

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  2. Say Willie, howzabout we call this form the Bazillion --7 words arranged into 3 stopless bazills?

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