Wednesday, July 31, 2013

Light

[Norma photo]
From above,
A little light
Across a
Newly hatched dove,
Inquisitive,
Touching an autoelic
Spark inside.
That is awfully
Close to love.

6 comments:

  1. Something inside got soft(er) at that last line.

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  2. I loved every single line of this poem...you have such a way with words.

    On a separate note...I don't think there is ever an entry you've posted that I've not had to look a word up. This time, of course, it was 'autoelic'. THANK YOU for expanding my vocabulary... :)

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  3. What a great concept, lovely poem.

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  4. This is not just a beautiful poem, it is a very delicate way of appreciating our creator and also the beauty we see in nature. Thanks:)

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  5. A beautiful poem, Geo. And thanks for thinking of me, I searched until I found a scooter that has a battery that weighs 16lb. It arrives tomorrow, so will see how I manage!

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