Saturday, January 21, 2017

Sub Rosa 2

Storm grows.
Two winds in
Colliding clouds
Combine above
A rose   --secrets
Retreat in shadows.

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    1. Thanks, Rick. Somehow, it's still incomplete. One of those poems I'll revisit and maybe revise --something it hides under the rose.

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  2. An analogy, maybe?

    A beautiful photo and lovely poem, certainly.

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    1. O Jenny, yes, it is like tremendous things currently afoot that I don't understand. Reference to the confessional rose means there's more that nobody's heard outside the booth.

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  3. How do you pack so much power and beauty in so few words?
    Thank you for another gem, Geo. =)

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    1. Thank you, Robyn. I think words find each other out of fun and affection, like in your poems.

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  4. Hey Geo,

    Every moment
    of uncertainity
    Will remind me
    of these words
    And I will
    take it a bit easy
    For better or
    for worse

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    1. Thank you,KK, for reading my poem. And thanks again for your excellent poem in return!

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