Thursday, March 7, 2019

Whirlwinds And Plum Blossoms


Wind sweeps petals around 
Us in spring and we swirling 
Go disguised in dustdevils--
Observe without bias and
Classify our observations
In congress of whirlwinds.
We suspect we are mammals.






12 comments:

  1. I love the thought of being swept up into a dancing dust devil.

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    1. I suspect we are swept up in cyclones of thought, Rick, and flung into our futures.

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  2. but we're not entirely sure lol. This is lovely Geo and conjures up a picture in my mind of delicate blossoms swrirling in the air.

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    1. Thanks, Delores. When we see it happen, we know there's something magical going on.

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  3. Petals and snowflakes swirling in the air look very much alike . . . but there is a profound difference in temperature for us hairless mammals :)

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    1. Cold or warm, Jenny, we still feel the invisible touch of something tremendous.

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  4. You always pen words in such a way that I go from inquisitive to smiling. The last lines in particular, and your use of "congress", did it for me.
    Thank you and be well, Geo.

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    1. Sincere thanks, dear Robyn. In spiritual optimism, compassionate identity and biological congress, we are a part and force of nature. You are remarkable.

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  5. i used to stare at white plum blossoms that looked like a long lace alongwith foothills (native village)

    your sublime poetry reminded me days of wanders under trees when wind swept away the leaves like efficient cleaner and we children picked up the fallen fruits in our tied lap of frocks

    remarkably done my friend!

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    1. Thank you dear Baili. Your lovely comment reminds me of my own childhood.

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